Eeee, First Aid! ♥ And I love how you write him: that is so what he'd do. And then I love how you describe the 'look'--it fits so perfectly, and it captures the desperation--gorgeous!

And then how he was shot: it's in character. Hurrah! And you did such a wonderful job with him not being killed, even indirectly--it's subtle but it still gets the point across, irrevocably. I love it!