Eeee, First Aid! ♥ And I love how you write him: that is so what he'd do. And then I love how you describe the 'look'--it fits so perfectly, and it captures the desperation--gorgeous!
And then how he was shot: it's in character. Hurrah! And you did such a wonderful job with him not being killed, even indirectly--it's subtle but it still gets the point across, irrevocably. I love it!
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Date: 2008-06-02 05:01 pm (UTC)And then how he was shot: it's in character. Hurrah! And you did such a wonderful job with him not being killed, even indirectly--it's subtle but it still gets the point across, irrevocably. I love it!